Saturday, August 28, 2010

Some couplets for a refreshing change



I've been attempting to be a multi-lingual poet (perhaps lacking finesse) against the advice of my friends. I started off by writing in English and then migrated to Urdu and intend to write something (anything) in Hindi and Telugu as well. 


I have few Urdu couplets to share, and although they are in Urdu , i had to type it all in Hindi as blogger doesn't support Urdu plus i wasn't in approval with other Urdu typing options available. So in case you don't get anything, you always have the option to ask me.



हमे तुमसे इश्क तोह इन्तेहा से ज्यादा है,
यह और बात के कभी इज़हार न करसके |
तुम्हारी हर अदा हमारी मस्सर्रत की वजह तो है,
यह और बात के कभी हम तुम्हे खुश न रख सके |





कहते  हैं चाँद पैदा करता है समंदर की हर लहर, 
चांदनी की कसम याद करते है हम उसे हर सहर |
इन्किलाबी जज्बे ने घोल दिया नसों में है वो ज़हर,
की अब क़दम चूमती है हर वो लहर
जिसका मकसद-इ-पैदाइश था धाना हमपे कहर |



किसी दरक्थ से एक पत्ता आज फिर टूटा,
एक मासूम की उँगलियों से उसकी माँ का हात आज फिर छूटा |
ज़िन्दगी से है मुराद बस उलझनों को सुलझाना,
हौसला रखो गर परेशानियों ने तुम्हे हर पल लूटा |



More couplets and shaayari on the way................

9 comments:

  1. last one i read it before also,and regarding the two gotta question to ask....does a poet only does poetry or he proposes his poetry to someone????????????

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  2. Hello!
    Dear Anonymous, i wonder where you've read the last one before as it is my original work (unless if i happen to know you and have shared with you). A poet for sure does poetry and also (at least me) doesn't refrain from proposing if need be.

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  3. Dear ms-cube!
    I did not meant the last one ain't your original work instead i had already read it when you shared with me.And stop being diplomatic and tell me the persons name whom you aimed at.

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  4. Hello?
    Are we playing games here? i don't know who you are, but you better ask me personally all that is cooking in your mind. And nobody is taking names here, alright?

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  5. Dear Mr/Ms Anonymous im Anonymous too i think i have an answer to your first question.
    Poets are fiercely private people when he uses his poetry for "proposing" its called "aashiqui"(in English its called courting) so take lite drink sprite and forget the shite.

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  6. Mr/Ms Anonymous
    i want to remind you that this blog is meant to share one's views on sweet ms-cube's poetry but not on someones comment!!!let me and ms-cube interact,ok!So don't stick your nose between us :-)

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  7. hey! hey! hey! What's goin on folks? i appreciate your enthusiasm but let's discuss about the post here, let us not point fingers. Am i making myself clear?

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  8. Dear Mr/Ms Anonymous(The Original)
    I was giving my esteemed opinion and reminding you to share "ones views" and not "interact"

    Mr/Ms Anonymous-2

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  9. Dear Mr/Ms Anonymous(The Original) these few lines of poetry are dedicated to you

    The poetry is sweet
    but someone twit
    with an IQ equal to bit
    and misplaced wit
    does not know where to tweet
    and where not to tweet.

    take lite drink sprite and forget the shite.

    Mr/Ms Anonymous 2

    PS: i dont see any "noses" here i see only poetry and "one's views" to "interact".

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